tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3785123898944497813.post7750989204026254733..comments2010-04-28T04:21:23.576-07:00Comments on Reading: Fudge-a-Mania - 12/14/2009170537http://www.blogger.com/profile/11251927927933086952noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3785123898944497813.post-61713649842370073492010-03-24T02:07:51.687-07:002010-03-24T02:07:51.687-07:00The writing is good, except it would be nice that ...The writing is good, except it would be nice that if you could add a bit more detail when you are summarizing. I also think that you can do your connections a bit more; easier to read.170264https://www.blogger.com/profile/17576337358239135762noreply@blogger.com